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Something like this has already been done, like King of Buttons. You should also try adding more music in the game, because well, that's just me, but I don't like this type of music. Especially when it's in a game like this. The graphics were... well, I mean there wasn't really anything THAT graphical in the game. The button looked good, but my biggest problem with the game was that it was boring. You should add an interesting background and do something else besides just a white, blank background.
So as I said, something like this has already been done, but you still did OK.

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Score: 5

"Not bad."

submission: No Internet (bocodamondo)

date: August 10, 2009

For your first flash, it was pretty good, actually. There are still stuff you should improve, though. You should add a preloader in the beginning of the movie, you can find tutorials here on Newgrounds. Also, the sound quality would've been better. And for last, the video itself is kinda blurry, so you must be doing something a bit differently. But overall, it was good for your first flash though. Keep it up!

August 10, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks for the tipp next time i do it
but episode 2 is done i gonne make that with 'preloader' in episode 3 ^^

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Score: 6

"It was OK, I guess."

submission: Run!!

date: August 9, 2009

I gotta agree, you did come up with a pretty good concept. I'm not sure has anyone done something like this before. It's difficult and creative. I do have to complain about the gameplay a bit. The character's acceleration is a little too low, meaning that you start running slowly, and THEN full speed. I know, it's more realistic, but I found it hard to play sometimes. Also, no offence, but the music is horrible to listen to. It's kind of spooky, but it gets really annoying if you play it a longer time. The animation is awesome, good job with that.
Anyways, the game was OK, I guess. If you'd just fix some of the problems I mentioned, it would definitely be much better. But I can see you tried hard.